Another rewrite…

FINALLY! We’ve reached a point of compromise with our story and were FINALLY ready to move into finalizing some key points. We’ve essentially had to rewrite a lot of our core story, but we came out of the meeting really satisfied as a team, where we ended up. Turns out, we were missing a key plot device: motivation. By giving our main character a reason to feel pressured and worried about finding her toy, we’ve given her a reason to breakdown during the climax of the story. Anyways, the new rewrite means a new set of storyboards, but we’re gonna start working on those next week, after we have the screenplay written out. For now, here’s what our plot looks like on a graph, with rising action on the left, climax at the top, and falling action on the right.